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His hands don't seem to be finished, especially his right hand, flattened by the black outline and by the lack of shading. The metal elements need more shine, they are too dull to look like metal. The smoke seems unfinished too (shape + one pixel missing in one of the pointed coils).
dang that's one awesome sand wraith, cant wait to see it animated.
faved.
thanks for the comments, i see the corrections you said. ill correct it
Maybe i will follow GormenGhast advice because its looks very hard to animate and im suck at animation :P when i got better i will back to this one and animate it right..
SFME(Sorry for my english)
pretty cool, the arm on the right looks a little stumpy though
Nice character design. The left sword blade looks like the curve could still be smoothed out a bit more, the lines look jagged on the lower half of the blade.
Good luck animating this! Can't wait to see it ;)
Very nicely drawn. This will take aaages to animate.... why not make a completely unique character yourself and animate that instead? It might be a better investment of your time. Saying that, don't trust me because I'm an idiot. :D
I was talking about the static :D
I wouldnt blame him for not wanting to animate that with even more colors. D:
Though more colors would make it even harder to animate. Good work, keep at it mate!
Nice smoke, more colors on it would make it look better :D
amazing shading!!